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Post by Mother Confessor on Apr 16, 2011 21:06:20 GMT -5
Finding the right name for a character is important. I intend for my character to be the Mother Confessor, but can't fill out the application until I've come up with the proper name. These are some I've found: Adela- means "noble". Which goes hand-in-hand with Mother Confessor, I think. Alysa- means "rational". My character will be rational to the extreme. She will grow past this during interaction with other characters-- if only slightly. Alyas- anagram for Alysa and means "brave one". Ema- means "serious". Ethana- anagram for Athena and means "strong; firm". Or if it isn't too cliche, them name Athena itself. Sophie/ Sophia- means "wisdom". Valerie- means "fierce". Alice- means "noble" I'm open to any other suggestions and would appreciate your help. This thread is also for anyone else who needs help with their character's name
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Post by Lord Rahl on Apr 16, 2011 23:42:26 GMT -5
Well, I'd say you had the same thought as me when you chose your username. I'd go with Adela, but Alysa would be a close second.
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Post by Mother Confessor on Apr 17, 2011 0:37:14 GMT -5
I was gonna put Mother Confessor as my username but didn't know if that part was taken or not... I think I'll stick with Adela
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Post by Lord Rahl on Apr 17, 2011 1:05:16 GMT -5
I can change your name to Mother Confessor, if you'd like. ;D
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Post by Mother Confessor on Apr 17, 2011 1:17:12 GMT -5
Can't I do that myself?
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Post by Lord Rahl on Apr 17, 2011 1:32:59 GMT -5
I suppose you can.
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Post by Anthony on Apr 22, 2011 15:11:14 GMT -5
Oops. Accidentally edited your post instead of replying to it. Sorry.
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Post by Lord Rahl on Apr 22, 2011 23:02:32 GMT -5
You could go for Alaric Trebane. Not sure why "Trebane" sticks out in my head, but yeah.
And in regards to your writing, it seemed fine, the only thing I'd change is placement of some of the quotation marks. At times you would end what a character was saying with a quotation mark and then have them continue talking and add another, and in one or two places you didn't add a quotation mark where it should have been, and thus it was a little more difficult to tell what was the character talking and what wasn't.
Other than that, pretty good. I found your first post interesting and it makes me want to continue on my side so I can see what you'll do next. ;D
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